Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Ngày thi 2/2/2024)

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: privately funded scientific research has stimulated innovation
        • Supporting idea: Individuals who conduct research on the behalf of commercial interests are typically encouraged to think creatively in developing new solutions to pervasive problems. 
        • Example: Founded and managed by tech magnate Elon Musk, SPACEX has introduced new solutions to existing problems in space transportation such as reducing production costs on their rockets by using 3D printing technology and mass production methods.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations will help them develop their own products and create competition in the marketplace. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "conduct" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Society will therefore benefit from new inventions and better products.
        • Example: Encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations, such as pharmaceutical companies investing in research for new drugs, not only fosters innovation and product development but also introduces healthy competition in the marketplace, ultimately benefiting society with new inventions and improved products.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: privately funded scientific research has stimulated innovation
        • Supporting idea: Individuals who conduct research on the behalf of commercial interests are typically encouraged to think creatively in developing new solutions to pervasive problems. 
        • Example: Founded and managed by tech magnate Elon Musk, SPACEX has introduced new solutions to existing problems in space transportation such as reducing production costs on their rockets by using 3D printing technology and mass production methods.
      • Main idea 2: encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations will help them develop their own products and create competition in the marketplace. 
        • Supporting idea: Society will therefore benefit from new inventions and better products.
        • Example: Encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations, such as pharmaceutical companies investing in research for new drugs, not only fosters innovation and product development but also introduces healthy competition in the marketplace, ultimately benefiting society with new inventions and improved products.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: One major concern is the potential bias in research findings driven by profit motives. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Private companies may prioritize projects that promise lucrative returns over those addressing broader societal needs. 
          • This commercial focus can lead to a neglect of research in critical but less profitable areas, limiting the overall societal impact of scientific endeavors.
      • Main idea 2: Moreover, the exclusive control of research by private entities can hinder the free exchange of information. 
        • Supporting idea:
          • Unlike government-funded research, which often emphasizes transparency and open-access sharing of knowledge, private companies may safeguard their findings for proprietary reasons. 
          • This lack of transparency can impede the collective progress of scientific understanding and limit the broader benefits to society.
        • Example: In the pharmaceutical industry, private companies often withhold crucial information from clinical trials for proprietary reasons, hindering transparency and impeding the collective progress of scientific understanding.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. This trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, scientific research funded by private entities offers numerous advantages. Firstly, privately funded scientific research has significantly stimulated innovation. Individuals who conduct research on behalf of commercial interests are typically encouraged to think creatively in developing new solutions to pervasive problems. For example, SPACEX, founded and managed by tech magnate Elon Musk, has introduced groundbreaking solutions in space transportation, such as reducing production costs by utilizing 3D printing technology and mass production methods. Secondly, encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations helps them develop their own products and create competition in the marketplace. Society benefits from new inventions and improved products, such as when pharmaceutical companies invest in research for new drugs, fostering innovation and introducing healthy competition that ultimately serves the public.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, there are numerous disadvantages associated with scientific research financed through private means. One major concern is the potential bias in research findings driven by profit motives. Private companies may prioritize projects that promise lucrative returns over those addressing broader societal needs, leading to a neglect of critical but less profitable research areas and limiting the overall societal impact of scientific endeavors. Moreover, the exclusive control of research by private entities can hinder the free exchange of information. Unlike government-funded research, which often emphasizes transparency and open-access sharing of knowledge, private companies may safeguard their findings for proprietary reasons, thereby impeding collective scientific progress and limiting the broader benefits to society. For instance, in the pharmaceutical industry, private companies frequently withhold crucial information from clinical trials, undermining transparency and hindering the advancement of scientific understanding.

In conclusion, while private funding of scientific research offers significant advantages in terms of innovation and competition, its disadvantages, such as potential bias and lack of transparency, are equally substantial.

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