Giải đề"Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 4/3/2024 )

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 4/3/2024 )

Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To  what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• To place significant emphasis on … = focus on
• Be attributable to … = caused by. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
• Be overwhelmingly negative = greatly negative
• At large = as a whole
• preferential treatment = favor s.t
• to have its root in … = result from …
• across a wide variety of industries = across many businesses, fields
• to accumulate relevant expertise = learn relevant knowledge in the field
• to some degree = to a certain extent
• on-the-job training = training to do the job
• to act as proof for … = prove …
• to minimize the time and associated costs = reduce the time and costs needed
• to pale in comparison to s.t = not as important as s.t
• adverse impacts = negative effects. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "effect" tiếng anh
• people from less privileged segments of society = poor people
• families with low income levels
• to put s.o at a distinct disadvantage = become a disadvantage for s.o
• internationally-recognized qualifications = degrees that are recognized worldwide
• coupled with this is … = in addition, …
• to forge official qualifications = illegally create fake degrees
• to interfere with equal opportunity in the current job market
• to provoke public uproar = make people angry
• job seekers = people who find jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "find" tiếng anh

  IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• The Benefits of Staying in the Same Job for Life:

  • Employees have a stable career with one employer;
  • They have a good pension and health insurance;
  • Their salaries gradually increase;
  • They may be promoted within the organization;
  • They demonstrate loyalty;  >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"transcend"tiếng anh
  • Experienced staff can be trusted with more responsibility;
  • They become part of a team;
  • There is a clearly-defined path for development.

• The Benefits of not Staying in the Same Job:

  • People often change jobs in order to further their career;
  • Another company may offer a promotion or a higher salary;
  • People who change jobs can gain more experience; >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "protestation" tiếng anh
  • They can learn different skills;
  • Changing jobs is interesting and challenging;
  • People can retrain in a different occupation;
  • In a fast-changing world, workers need to be flexible;
  • People need to develop a wider range of experience and skills.  

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• Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa không ủng hộ) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, một phần nào đó cũng không đồng tình
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về vì sao đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho
      • Main idea 1: It allows individuals to gain expertise in a specific field, build a deep understanding of their industry, and develop a strong professional network over time. 
        • Supporting idea: This can lead to increased job security, a sense of mastery, and potentially higher levels of job satisfaction.
        • Example: Steve Jobs' lifelong commitment to Apple allowed him to gain expertise in technology and design, build a profound understanding of the industry, and cultivate a strong professional network, contributing to increased job security, a sense of mastery, and ultimately higher levels of job satisfaction.
      • Main idea 2: Additionally, employers may value long-term commitment and loyalty, which could translate into promotions and advancement opportunities.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
        • Supporting idea: This is because employees who demonstrate continuity in their roles contribute to organizational stability, foster a sense of reliability, and are more likely to develop an in-depth understanding of company processes, all of which can be advantageous for promotions and advancement opportunities within the company.
        • Example: My friend - Smith's decade-long commitment to a tech company allowed him to ascend through the ranks, showcasing how employers often value long-term dedication and loyalty, translating into promotions and advancement opportunities within the same organization.

• • • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về vì sao không đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho
      • Main idea 1: Changing jobs frequently can offer a diverse range of experiences, skills, and perspectives. 
        • Supporting idea: Exposure to different industries and roles can broaden one's skill set, foster adaptability, and enhance problem-solving abilities. 
        • Example: Research by the Bureau of Labor Statistics indicates that individuals who have worked in various roles and industries tend to possess a more diverse skill set compared to those who have stayed in one job for an extended period. This adaptability is crucial in today's dynamic job market, where technological advancements and industry trends are constantly changing.
      • Main idea 2: Job changers may also have the opportunity to explore various work environments, company cultures, and leadership styles, allowing them to discover what truly resonates with them and contributes to overall job satisfaction.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Exploring different work environments exposes individuals to diverse challenges and working conditions. 
        • Example:
          • A study published in the Journal of Occupational and Organizational Psychology found that professionals who changed jobs frequently reported a higher level of job satisfaction, indicating that exposure to varied work environments contributes positively to overall career contentment.

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