Giải đề"It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: People working for a variety of companies are given more opportunities to learn different skills. 
      • Supporting idea: When workers start a new job, they will be exposed to new co-workers and a different corporate culture that shows them how to do things differently. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng động từ "expose" tiếng anh
      • Example: My friend  - Sarah's transition from a small startup to a large tech company accelerated her learning by exposing her to diverse technologies and experienced colleagues, showcasing the value of switching workplaces for skill enrichment
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: an individual who takes risks will develop more mature personal relationships.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • a person who takes risks in their personal life and enters into various relationships throughout high school and university will become a better judge of character. 
        • Their allegedly risky behavior can then serve as the foundation for personal growth and increased maturity. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "growth" tiếng anh
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: People working for a variety of companies are given more opportunities to learn different skills >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "company" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: When workers start a new job, they will be exposed to new co-workers and a different corporate culture that shows them how to do things differently.  
        • Example: My friend  - Sarah's transition from a small startup to a large tech company accelerated her learning by exposing her to diverse technologies and experienced colleagues, showcasing the value of switching workplaces for skill enrichment
      • Main idea 2: an individual who takes risks will develop more mature personal relationships.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • a person who takes risks in their personal life and enters into various relationships throughout high school and university will become a better judge of character. 
          • Their allegedly risky behavior can then serve as the foundation for personal growth and increased maturity. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: When a person takes a professional risk, they as well as their families are affected
        • Supporting idea: undertaking a risky trek / expedition with one’s wife and children puts the whole family in danger. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "family"
        • Example:  For example, leaving a job with a stable income to start a business might sound like an attractive option but it may throw the dependants into a doom of uncertainty especially because 99% of new businesses are bound to fail within the first 10 years. 
      • Main idea 2: Failure may lead to broken confidence, depression and financial losses
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Unsuccessful job transitions can dent one's self-esteem and confidence. 
          • Failing to meet new job expectations or struggling to adapt to a different work environment can make individuals doubt their abilities and competence, leading to decreased self-confidence.

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