Phân tích "Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 24/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 24/5/2023)

Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: There are several reasons why millions of tons of food are wasted every day. 
    • Main idea 1: One primary reason is food loss during production, processing, transportation, and storage due to inadequate infrastructure and poor handling practices. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Inadequate infrastructure refers to a lack of proper facilities, such as cold storage, transportation vehicles, and processing units, which are necessary for preserving and handling food effectively. 
        • Poor handling practices involve improper handling and storage techniques at various stages of the food supply chain. 
      • Example: For example, inadequate temperature control during transportation can accelerate food spoilage. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"transportation"tiếng anh 
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, consumer behavior, such as buying more food than needed or discarding food based on expiration dates, contributes to food waste.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Consumers may buy more than necessary due to promotional offers, bulk buying habits, or lack of meal planning. 
        • Many consumers discard food based on the expiration date, even if the food is still perfectly edible. 
        • This misconception contributes to unnecessary food waste, as the expiration date is often a conservative estimate and does not necessarily indicate the actual freshness or safety of the food. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "indicate" tiếng anh
      • Example: For example, a study conducted by the National Resources Defense Council (NRDC) in the United States found that many consumers misinterpret the meaning of expiration dates on food products. As a result, perfectly good food that is still safe to consume is often discarded unnecessarily. 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Firstly, improving infrastructure and storage facilities can minimize food loss during transportation and storage
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By implementing better transportation systems, such as refrigerated trucks and efficient logistics, the quality and freshness of perishable goods can be better preserved. 
        • Investing in proper storage facilities, such as warehouses with temperature and humidity control, can significantly reduce food spoilage.
      • Example: For example, in India, the government launched the Pradhan Mantri Kisan Sampada Yojana (PMKSY) to strengthen the country's food processing infrastructure. Under this initiative, modern storage facilities, cold chains, and food processing units are being established across the country. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "strengthen" tiếng anh 
    • Main idea 2: Secondly, raising awareness among consumers about the importance of reducing food waste through education campaigns can help change behavior. 
      • Supporting idea: By providing information and promoting responsible consumption habits, individuals can become more mindful of their food choices and take steps to minimize waste.
      • Example: For example, the Love Food Hate Waste campaign in the United Kingdom has been successful in raising awareness about food waste and providing practical tips to reduce it. Through various initiatives, such as sharing recipes for using leftovers, providing portion control guidance, and educating on proper food storage, the campaign has empowered consumers to make informed decisions and reduce food waste in their households.

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