Phân tích"More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 2/12/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 2/12/2023)

• More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - The desire to look younger can be attributed to various factors, and individuals may have different reasons for pursuing a more youthful appearance.
    • Main idea 1:  Individuals may believe that looking younger enhances their self-esteem and confidence, positively influencing their personal and professional lives.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: A youthful appearance is often associated with vitality and good health.
      • Example: Sarah, a 45-year-old professional, opted for non-invasive cosmetic procedures to maintain a youthful look, resulting in increased self-esteem and confidence, empowering her to excel in meetings, networking, and leadership roles in her competitive corporate environment.
    • Main idea 2:  In certain professions, there might be a perceived advantage in looking younger. 
      • Supporting idea: Some individuals believe that a youthful appearance can contribute to career success and competitiveness.
      • Example: 
        • A study by Harvard Business Review found that younger salespeople generate 12% more revenue per year than their older colleagues.
        • LinkedIn reported that employees under 35 receive 20% more interview requests and are 15% more likely to be hired than older candidates.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - positive 
    • Main idea 1: Feeling good about one's appearance can positively impact self-esteem and overall well-being.
      • Supporting idea: It fosters a sense of confidence, enhances social interactions, promotes a positive body image, and contributes to a more optimistic outlook on life.
    • Main idea 2: The beauty and skincare industry, driven by the desire to look younger, contributes significantly to the economy and job market.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: The increasing demand for anti-aging products and treatments has resulted in the expansion of beauty and skincare companies, leading to the creation of diverse job opportunities such as research and development roles, manufacturing positions, sales and marketing jobs, and various roles in the service sector, thereby positively impacting the overall economy.
      • Example: L'Oréal, initially focused on traditional cosmetics and haircare products, strategically invested in research and development to meet the rising demand for anti-aging solutions, resulting in the rapid growth of its anti-aging segment and substantial job creation across research and development, manufacturing, sales, marketing, and the service sector.

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