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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 2/7/2023 )
I. Đề bài
- More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE
- Main idea: posting personal data on the Internet makes users potentially susceptible to criminal activities >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS
- Supporting idea: The private information shared online including one’s names, addresses or social security numbers can be exploited for illicit purposes such as financial fraud. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the targeted individuals would encounter a multitude of risks such as phishing emails, identity theft or even property fraud, which decisively leads to many real-life tragedies)
- Example: In 2013, Target, one of the largest retail chains in the United States, fell victim to a massive data breach that compromised the personal information of over 70 million customers. Cybercriminals gained unauthorized access to Target's database, obtaining names, addresses, phone numbers, and credit card information.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE
- Main idea: People have little privacy when using the Internet >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vưng topic Internet - communication IELTS
- Supporting idea: If someone was to get hold of something private we may have wrote and shared it online, once it’s out there, it’s very hard to get off.
- Example: For example, social networks provide little privacy protection. (Facebook, as one of the most popular social networks, doesn’t provide much privacy protection for their users) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "social media" IELTS
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