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I. Đề bài
People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng Topic Family IELTS
III. Phân tích
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Dạng bài này sẽ phân chia bố cục 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
Body 1: Causes (Nên chọn ra 2 causes)
Main Idea 1: Technologies separate family members and deter them from connecting with each other in a meaningful way. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn: Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh
- Supporting Idea: Some people think that they are with their children, but the fact is that they just stay in one place with their children while different people do different things in the same house.
- Example: If family members become too immersed in using their devices for individual recreational purposes, like checking their social media accounts or browsing their favorite websites, they may neglect their relationships with other family members.
Main Idea 2: Time with their children, parents, or spouses is so scarce. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The amount of quality time that a family spends together is likely to reduce, negatively impacting family relations)
- Supporting Idea: With the fast pace of life combined with mounting pressure, people are always busy >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn: Cách paraphrase "busy" tiếng anh
Body 2: Effects (Nên chọn ra 2 effects)
Main Idea 1: An individual may experience emotional distress if they do not receive proper support from their immediate family.
- Supporting Idea: This is because it is believed that family is where people can share their feelings and problems, which help them release their stress >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn: Từ vựng topic "Family history" IELTS
- Example: Young children who do not have time with their siblings or parents are often more vulnerable to social pressures, such as bullying, because they do not receive enough affection and encouragement from their family. In reality, those children may grow up with low self-esteem and sometimes depression.
Main Idea 2: The bonds between parents and children may be weakened, which usually leads to conflicts and unhappiness.
- Supporting Idea: Family relationships will greatly suffer because it will become more difficult to bridge the generation gap between parents and children without family bonding time >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn: Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
- Example: For instance, when parents do not spend much time with their children, their children will lack appropriate parental care and attention and are likely to follow a path toward criminal behaviors.
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