Phân tích"The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 24/12/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 24/12/2022)

• The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: posting personal data on the Internet makes users potentially susceptible to criminal activities >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS
      • Supporting idea: The private information shared online including one’s names, addresses or social security numbers can be exploited for illicit purposes such as financial fraud.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the targeted individuals would encounter a multitude of risks such as phishing emails, identity theft or even property fraud, which decisively leads to many real-life tragedies)
      • Example:
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: People have little privacy when using the Internet >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vưng topic Internet - communication IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: If someone was to get hold of something private we may have wrote and shared it online, once it’s out there, it’s very hard to get off.
      • Example: For example, social networks provide little privacy protection. (Facebook, as one of the most popular social networks, doesn’t provide much privacy protection for their users) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "social media" IELTS 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea:  The information is used to create helpful services for consumers
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Utilising machine learning and big data technologies, a company may understand their customers better. 
          • This means that companies may provide better services or make products that exactly suit customer needs.
        • Example: 
          • Google maps is a good example of an entirely free platform used by millions
          • Those who use electronice wallets, for example, may get their online transactions done in a matter of seconds if their identity and biometric data are already on the system.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: posting personal data on the Internet makes users potentially susceptible to criminal activities >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS
        • Supporting idea: The private information shared online including one’s names, addresses or social security numbers can be exploited for illicit purposes such as financial fraud.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the targeted individuals would encounter a multitude of risks such as phishing emails, identity theft or even property fraud, which decisively leads to many real-life tragedies)
        • Example:
      • Main idea 2: People have little privacy when using the Internet >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vưng topic Internet - communication IELTS 
        • Supporting idea: If someone was to get hold of something private we may have wrote and shared it online, once it’s out there, it’s very hard to get off.
        • Example: For example, social networks provide little privacy protection. (Facebook, as one of the most popular social networks, doesn’t provide much privacy protection for their users) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "social media" IELTS 

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